Oh, very nice. I'm still slowly learning the art of comic making but you do have enough interest in this that it's got you wanting to continue the story.
I have yet to try angled panels, usually they seem like they waste space and make it harder to understand the order the frames go in. Not too much confusion here if any at all. Great job on the lighting in panel two, not only is it out of the frame but makes it seem the dress is that more important with the metaphorical light.
If I could judge anything on these frames it would be the way the last panel was constructed. It's a great idea, but it looks a little out of place to me; a bit awkward. I think it feels odd because it's over abundant and many of the hearts start to lose their shape to actually be hearts.